Sunday Photo Fiction: October 5th 2014
Every week on a Sunday, a new photo is used as a prompt for Flash Fiction challenge using around 200 words based on that image. Your story does not have to be exactly what the item in the photo is as long as there is at least a reference to it. You can make it anything you want, and enjoy what you write, and we will as well.
“What is it Mom?”
“An effigy, an icon of ancient people doing something called ‘swimming’. The University’s Archaeology Department found it when the construction crews were digging the foundation for the new language department a few years ago.”
“Swimming? What’s that? It looks like they’re stuck in cement. Did they ‘swim’ in cement?”
“No. Swimming was an activity where people would go into a vast area of water and propel themselves by laying on their stomachs while moving their arms and legs in a forward motion. Supposedly it was done for fun as well as competition.”
“Where’d they go to put themselves in water? We don’t have anything that holds enough water for people to lay in and move their arms and legs.”
“No honey, we don’t. But Grandma Rene told me a story that her grandmother told about how she would go somewhere called a ‘park’ with her friends when she was a little girl. There were things called ‘streams’ of water running freely across the landscape and they would run, play and swim in the water.”
“Gee, I wish I lived in those olden days, they had it better than us.”
“Yes Tony, I do believe they did have it better.”
—200 Words—
At the rate it’s going, this will be in the next thousand years. An excellent story. I like the way you told this and the words at the end. Sounds like my kids “I wish I lived in the olden days”. They used to say that about my childhood LOL.
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I used to say the same thing when I was a child. For all of humanity’s advancements, there are many sacrifices. Thank you so much for visiting and especially for commenting!
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You’re welcome 🙂 I like to visit all the stories that are posted 🙂
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Thank you! I do too, I’ll have to check back to see if there are more. 🙂
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There’s another two 🙂 I am hoping to get mine done in the next day or so.
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I’ll be away for a couple of days, eye surgery tomorrow, ugh! But, I’ll be back! 😀
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Oh joy :-\ I hope it all goes okay for you and you aren’t vision deficient for too long
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😀
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A very likely scenario in a few centuries.
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This is what I fear for generations to come. Thank you so much for your comment! 😀
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I like your take on the photo – very imaginative – and with that message to wise up! water is so precious….
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Yes, I do believe water is our most precious natural resource. Thank you so much for your comment!
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Hey – i saw this article – did not read it yet – but thought you might want to skim it
http://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2014/oct/05/nfl-breast-cancer-pink-women?CMP=ema_565
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Thank you so much for this. This is very interesting information! I am going to re-blog it. Thanks again!! 😀
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you are welcome and it reminded me of other things you wrote – I will have to skim it later – have a nice week 🙂 ❤
~y
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You too! 😀 ❤
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What beautifully represented story Swoosie ! Absolutely brilliant take on the photograph with a great message, 🙂
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Thank you so very much! I hope things improve for our future generations and this is kept as fiction. 😉
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You are so kind! Thank you!
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That’s not too far ahead, is it? And we continue to waste and poison our water and with changes in climate, who knows how long we’ll have this blessing.
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Yes, it is very frightening. I hope mankind starts paying attention and homage to our earth. Thank you so much for commenting! 😀
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I fascinating glimpse into the future. Water is precious and so is our countryside but we need to take care of it.
Enjoyed
Ally 🙂
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Thank you so much for your comment! 😀
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Great write Swoosique, a possible future I hope never comes.
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Me too! Thanks so much for visiting and commenting! 😀
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